In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In
this
modern era, with the advancement in technology, majority of the companies have now switched to using these technical facilities instead
of meeting in physical form. This
essay will explain that the advantages of this
trend are equal to the disadvantages.
On one hand, through online communication, employees can easily connect with each other. E-mails, text messages, phone calls and video calls have helped the managers of various organisations to get in touch directly with their subordinates instead
of passing on the messages from one person to another and thus
avoiding grapevine communication. For example
, a supervisor can directly send an e-mail or a text to a particular worker in the company if they are either on leave or are living in another city.
On the other
hand
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however
, it is hard to detect the tone of the message in online texts. There is always a high risk of miscommunication through mails
and phone texts. Correct your spelling
emails
For example
, the head of a company may find it untidy and disrespectful if their employee answers their messages with a simple ''ok.'' even though it wouldn't be intentional.
In conclusion, although
online applications have helped workers to connect and
with each other speedily, it has Correct word choice
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also
increased the risk of mishap in delievering
the tone of the message between the working subordinates. And Correct your spelling
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thus
, the pros and cons of the trend are the same.Submitted by rutvipatel199 on
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