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The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table provides the
percentage
 of six kinds of
household
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households
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 who live in
poverty
 in In
Austraila
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Australia
 in
specific
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 year.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
rates
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rate
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 of
poverty
is
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are
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 highest in sole parents,
while
 it is lowest in elderly
couple
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couples
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, and
also
 the
the
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apply
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rate of
poverty
 is represent
high
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a high
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percentage
 when compared with
total
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a total
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of
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population of
Austrailans
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Australians
people
. .
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.
...
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 Looking at the table in more detail, we can see
the
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that
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 11% of
Australians
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Australian
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people
 live in
poverty
 in 1999. The highest
percentage
 of
poverty
 in alone parents was 21 %, followed by single
people
 without children was 19%. The
thrid
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third
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 group who
struggle
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struggled
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 with
poverty
 was
couple
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couples
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 with children was 12 %. Regarding
others
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other
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categories, the
couple
 without children and
single
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the single
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 senior
person
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persons
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was approximately have
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the
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apply
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similar values was 7% and 6% ,respectively. The older
couple
 is ad had the lowest
percentage
 of struggling with
povery
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poverty
 compared to other group
people
 was 4%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, poverty, couple, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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