Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In some families, old
people
are carried
the burden of Change the verb form
have carried
care
for Wrong verb form
caring
parents
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their parents
however
, rest
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a rest
home
or assisted living Fix the agreement mistake
homes
facility
are a Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
choise
for Correct your spelling
choice
this
issue. In this
following essay, i
will explain Change the capitalization
I
that
advantages and disadvantages of Correct determiner usage
the
this
on the given topic.
Firstly
, These facilties
have several services Correct your spelling
facilities
such
as infirmary
and refectory. If aged Correct article usage
an infirmary
people
get ill, doctors and nurses will check their healty
and treat it Correct your spelling
healthy
health
in
there. Nurse Change preposition
apply
regular
Change the word
regularly
give
their meal and their medicine .There is Change the verb form
gives
great
place for serious illness Add an article
a great
who
is Correct pronoun usage
which
Alhzeimer
, Correct your spelling
Alzheimer
Parkinson
. Change noun form
Parkinson's
Furthermore
, They meet with
new Change preposition
apply
people
in
there. Change preposition
apply
Care
homes have different activities such
as playing chess, doing sudoku, doing puzzle
or walking in Fix the agreement mistake
puzzles
garden
. They can Add an article
the garden
a garden
doing
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do
be doing
this activities
with other Change the determiner
this activity
these activities
people
thus
, might be Correct word choice
and thus
a
sociable. Actually, Change the article
apply
This
entertainment decrease depression and they have life energy. Additionally
, This
place is great
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a great
chose
for homeless Replace the word
choice
person
who Fix the agreement mistake
people
is
need Unnecessary verb
apply
care
because,
they are assisted Remove the comma
apply
in
there.
On the Change preposition
apply
otherhand
, Correct your spelling
other hand
Although
they have friends in
there, they can miss their family. Change preposition
apply
For
this
reason, They are going to
depression and feel Change preposition
into
like
alone. Change preposition
apply
Facility
may not be comfortable as Add an article
The facility
A facility
families
home, they Fix the agreement mistake
family
are not relax
. Change the verb form
are not relaxed
are not relaxing
Moreover
, There may not Add a missing verb
be avaible
avaible
on Correct your spelling
available
standarts
for Correct your spelling
standards
Add an article
a person
the person
person
in need of Fix the agreement mistake
persons
care
.Caregiver
might behave badly and damage them. Add an article
A caregiver
The caregiver
Person
have Fix the agreement mistake
People
diffuculity
on trust other Correct your spelling
difficulty
people
by the insult .
In conclusion, This
sector have
benefits and drawbacks but there is useful if Change the verb form
has
person
Correct article usage
a person
observe
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observes
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the facilty
facilty
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facility
faculty
standarts
Correct your spelling
standards
on
Change preposition
of
healty
and safety. Correct your spelling
health
healthy
Person
choise
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chooses
living
place where is Correct article usage
a living
be
happy.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...