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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine. For someone to live with a family for 6 months and look after their 6 years old child. Write a letter to the parents. explain why you would like the job give details of why you should be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Kiran,a student at Howard University in Sydney,Australia.I am writing
this
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 letter requesting you consider me
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 looking the candidates for baby care as you mentioned in the magazine. Sir,I am studying in the healthcare field and have specialised knowledge about it as I have a diploma in nursing
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 an early childhood course.
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 year, I graduated from the renowned college of Canada.
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 to that,I completed my co-up at a local baby care centre for four months. As a parent,I am well known about the fact that taking care of a child is very important as you cannot give the responsibility to any unknown person.I feel that I am the right person for
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 job and you can trust me as I have all the required degrees and experience.
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,I really want to explore your city so if you hire me I can do a job
as well as
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 visit different places. For
further
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 information,you can just contact me and I am attaching all the documents so that you can have a look. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran
Submitted by kiranbaidwan064 on

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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