You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine. For someone to live with a family for 6 months and look after their 6 years old child. Write a letter to the parents. explain why you would like the job give details of why you should be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Kiran,a student at Howard University in Sydney,Australia.I am writing

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letter requesting you consider me

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looking the candidates for baby care as you mentioned in the magazine. Sir,I am studying in the healthcare field and have specialised knowledge about it as I have a diploma in nursing

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an early childhood course.

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year, I graduated from the renowned college of Canada.

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to that,I completed my co-up at a local baby care centre for four months. As a parent,I am well known about the fact that taking care of a child is very important as you cannot give the responsibility to any unknown person.I feel that I am the right person for

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job and you can trust me as I have all the required degrees and experience.

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,I really want to explore your city so if you hire me I can do a job

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visit different places. For

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information,you can just contact me and I am attaching all the documents so that you can have a look. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran

kiranbaidwan064Mon Jun 26 2023

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
I am writing this letter regarding to vacancy announcement in Sydney Australian magazine you have a babysitter or nanny who lives with family for six months. I am interested in looking after your child and living at your home .

The Greeting

One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views andgive your own opinion.

Some people believe zoos are good places for people to learn about animals. Other people believe animals belong in nature and it is wrong to keep them in zoos. What do you think? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.

It could be argued that technology makes our lives easier and simpler. But there are certainly people who feel life has become more complicated due to modern inventions. Which opinion do you agree with? In your essay, include supporting details.