The chart below show average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities
The table given illustrates the average
time
(in hours
and minutes)which is used by women
and men for several kinds of daily activities
in the UK
. Overall
, Males and Females in the UK
spend their time
on sleep which is the most popular activity of those. Meanwhile, both men and women
spent time
on sports which are the least popular activities
demanded.
To begin
with, UK
males spent about 8.04 hours
sleeping during their daily activities
and just only 0,13 hours
used for sports and other activities
. It also
reported that females in the UK
spend 5.25 hours
a day on all leisure which is the second place most popular among men on several activities
such
as games and reading.
On the other hand
, women
in the UK
stated that they spent the time
at 8,18 hours
of sleep which is the most popular activity for those next followed by all leisure at 4,53 hours
and then
housework occupy on the third position at 3,00 hours
. Just only 0,07 hours
are used by women
in the UK
for sport.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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