Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
These day
, social Change the determiner
This day
These days
media
have become much broader Use synonyms
popularity
in Replace the word
popular
this
modern world.
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Although
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,
it can help Remove the comma
apply
people
keep in touch with Use synonyms
others
and follow the trends, it causes Use synonyms
people
to get Use synonyms
stresses
. In the following paragraphs, the benefits and drawbacks of social Wrong verb form
stressed
media
will be outlined in detail.
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To begin
with, it is undeniable that most Linking Words
people
in the world have spent more than 6 hours per day on social Use synonyms
media
, being the third component of their bodies. One of the major Use synonyms
benefit
is that Change to a plural noun
benefits
people
can update the latest news immediately. Use synonyms
For example
, the news is announcing Linking Words
about
fires and Change preposition
apply
while
Linking Words
people
are scrolling Use synonyms
their
phones, they could know Change preposition
through their
that
which place they should not visit. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Additionally
, the news mostly Linking Words
come
from sharing by their Change the verb form
comes
friends
and following pages on social Use synonyms
media
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, social Linking Words
media
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leading
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leads
people
close to one Use synonyms
others
more, especially their peers. To illustrate, despite the fact that Use synonyms
people
have not met or talked with their Use synonyms
friends
for long, they can perceive each Use synonyms
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others
life by just watching through social Change to a genitive case
other's
media
Use synonyms
such
as Facebook, Instagram, even Tiktok.
Even Linking Words
through
, social Correct your spelling
though
media
has much wider benefits, it causes plenty of drawbacks which is lacking of speeches. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
people
always look Use synonyms
on
their phones all the time and Change preposition
at
not
much talk to each Add a missing verb
do not
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others
even when Change to a singular noun
other
dinning
. Correct your spelling
dining
Next,
social Linking Words
media
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also
causes Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
getting
more stress. Change the verb form
to get
For example
, when they see their Linking Words
friends
bought something new, it is certainly true that they would have Use synonyms
that things
like their Change the determiner
that thing
those things
friends
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the trend on social Linking Words
media
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also
Linking Words
update
all the time, leading to getting more stress since most Change the verb form
updates
people
would follow the trends.
To summarize, from my perspective, social Use synonyms
media
offers both advantages and disadvantages equally which depends on Use synonyms
individual
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the individual
in
time Change preposition
apply
spending
.Replace the word
spent
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