The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

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the percentages of

women

and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking,cleaning,pet caring and repairing the house).And the

second

one

describe

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the amount of time each gender spent on each

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per day.

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two

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females are slow

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cleaing

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cleaning

clearing

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second

chart

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that

women

finish

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cooking in 85

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,cleaning is 63

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and in

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is 69

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).

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describe that each gender

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better

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repairing

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women

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and in

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4

percent

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exactly and men

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19

percent

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and 19

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in each

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).

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seem

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like same(

women

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is exactly 20

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is

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20

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and males are a bit more in

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each gender are same 20

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