some people think that children should be encouraged to play outdoor games that require physical activities instead of playing computer games at home. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, with the development of technology, high-tech devices are seemingly crucial parts of our lives. Especially with the heir, modern devices

such

as computers are obviously interesting sources that they can access to a vast range of online

games

, which limits them to spend more time playing outdoor

games

. Noticeably, some populations believe that offspring should be motivated to play physical-related activities

instead

of having indoor entertaining activities. In my opinion, I partly agree with that point of view. First of all,

it is clear that

children

should be encouraged to go outside and participate in the outdoor enterprise. By

this

, youngsters can improve their physical health and enhance their range of acknowledgements by exploring the world.

For instance

, my childhood friend, Emma, who always wonders about

this

world and tends to explore new things as much as possible, has a wide range of experiences and deep knowledge of biology and philosophy.

In addition

, a scion who regularly joins in physical activity is well-known as a good communicator and easygoing.

While

staying-home-oriented young people tend to lock themselves up in their own room, which puts their mental health and well-being at risk, outdoor-oriented

children

can have more opportunities to connect with society and create new social relationships, so they get more chances to higher their self-value.

For example

, sporty

children

, who usually play out-of-door

games

, are more optimistic and extroverted than the "bookworms" or computer

games

addicted ones.

On the other hand

, it can be said that not every electronic devices are harmful to

children

. Different from drugs and other addictive chemicals, computer

games

are entertaining apps that are developed to satisfy people's relaxation demands. Playing them at the proper times can help kids feel relaxed after a hard-working week at school, in some ways, which helps reduce stress for the young population. One possible evidence for

this

, I do access online apps almost every day, but I make sure to spend no more than 1 hour playing them each day

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so that I not only can feel at ease but

also

have time to practise reflex skills. In conclusion,

although

online gaming is a good source of entertainment, I still believe that offspring would rather play outdoor life than stay at home to develop social skills and experiences in life.