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In many nations, it is becoming increasingly common for every individual to follow a vegetarian
diet
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because It is very beneficial for the human
body
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and
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Food
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is the first priority of our life
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here, many disadvantages of vegetarian
food
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.
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essay will discuss both points of view in
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paragraph. On the one hand, lack of benefits of vegetarian
food
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.
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, all
food
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is very healthy and increases
body
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growth gives protein
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vegetables fulfil multiple
vitamines
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vitamins
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and good impact on bones, cells, brain.
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, educated people prefer a vegetarian
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rather than a non-veg
diet
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because they saved animals and
environment
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are environment
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friendly.
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, Many individuals
non-vegetarian
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diets the reason is vegetarian
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diet
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diets
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bad
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have bad
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effects on their bodies
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as tomatoes create stones in
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the kidneys
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, and blood pressure.
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, In some ,countries people follow
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a non-vegetarian
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diet
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because in their countries vegetarian
food
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is so expensive But they prefer a Vegetarian
diet
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. It
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with a number of fibres that so
gives
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positive energy.
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,
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food
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is essay
disjust
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disgust
in
body
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and with fat.
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, Non-vegetarian
food
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creates in the
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very dangerous
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such
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as obesity, cancer and heart attack.
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, It is a very harmful thing for animals, as
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human beings
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is our responsibility that take care of nature and not create any environmental issues. In Inclusion, Vegetables are a very good source of
body
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growth
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, It is easy to available
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because It is organic rather than
non-veg
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a non-veg
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diet
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Nowadays, people are following rich fibre
food
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diets and are health conscious.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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