the charts gives the information about two ggenre of tv shows watched by men and women and 4 diferent age groups in australia. the charts gives the information about two ggenre of tv shows watched by men and women and 4 diferent age groups in australia.
The bar graph
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
regarding
two shows of Change preposition
apply
reality
shows and game
shows watched by male and female and
for Correct word choice
apply
diferent
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different
genrations
age groups in Australia.
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generations
According to
the chart
70% Add a comma
,chart
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of female
female
mostly watched Fix the agreement mistake
females
realiuty
shows rather Correct your spelling
reality
than
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and
male
watched 38% . But the age group of 45 Fix the agreement mistake
males
they
watched equally Correct pronoun usage
apply
reality
and game
shows. For exmple
, Ladies gives lots of interest in Correct your spelling
example
reality
showa
rather than other shows.
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shows
Additionally
, In the second chart of game
shows 64% Change preposition
of male
male
prefer sports Fix the agreement mistake
males
game
shows and they watched game
shows with enjoy
than Replace the word
enjoyment
reality
shows. But the
60% Correct article usage
apply
women
watched Change preposition
of women
game
shows as compare
to male. The number of groups watched equally Change the form of the verb
compared
such
as 16-24. whereas
, 25
-34 and 35-44 age groups Correct article usage
the 25
lots of
watched Correct quantifier usage
apply
reality
shows than
Correct quantifier usage
more than
game
shows. overall
70% people
watched Change preposition
of people
reality
shows.Submitted by PREETY on
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