The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The maps compare the city of Nelson between the

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2000 and today.

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, between the given period, new commercial and residential buildings have appeared and new transportation services have been provided by the local government. In the north of the city, a hall residence was established nearby the university. On the east part of the college, trees have been replaced by a new shopping mall.

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, on the south side of the university, a tramline has been installed and the train station was moved from the west part of the town. In the centre 4 new bike rental services have been added and the road running in the south part of the centre, which used to be used by vehicles, changed to be only for pedestrians. On the north side of the road, where there used to be an old mark, a new shop appeared, and on the opposite side of the

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a covered market opened. Between the road and the port a new restaurant, bars, and clubs started running their businesses.

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