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The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given
map
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 is about changes made in
school
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 compared to the year 1985 till the present day as the number of students increased.
Overall
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, the maps illustrate some significant changes made in parking spaces and playing
fields
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 over a period of time. As we look at the
map
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, the car parking is built semicircularly which was rectangular in 1985. As we enter the
school
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 through the entrance of the present-day
map
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 we can see the office and
besides
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 the office, there was the library which is now replaced by a learning resources centre including a computer room. Apart from that, classrooms in front of the library are now shifted to the right
side
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 of the learning resource centre. Playing
fields
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 at the backside of the
school
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 is reduced to half and now it is situated in the left corner at the back of the
school
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. On the right-hand
side
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 of the playing
fields
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 and beside classrooms are the pool and triangular-shaped fitness centre. In the 1985
map
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, we can see that there were 2 storeys of
classroom
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 blocks opposite the library, which is now been optimised to 3 storeys. Coming to the present-day
map
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 we can see, to the left-hand
side
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 beside
this
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 three-storey
classroom
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 block is another
classroom
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 which is exactly in front of the playing
fields
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. At the
last
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 to the
right hand
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right-hand
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side
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 of the
3 storey
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3-storey
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classroom
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 block is the exit of the
school
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, school, fields, side, classroom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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