You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, -Explain that you would like to apply for the job -Give some details of any relevant experience that you have -Specify the days and times that would suit you

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Hello Mr Smith, I am writing

this

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letter to you to apply for a new job posting I have seen on social media. My name is Deeksha, I am living near your

restaurant

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, a walk-in distance of 10 minutes approximately. I have relevant experience in the cooking field

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expertise in serving. I have 3 years of working history in the same field. As mentioned, I worked at an American cuisine

restaurant

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. I was working as a line cook over there and apart from cooking my duties involved inventory control work and serving. I was preparing American popular salad recipes, Mexican food and Chinese food as restaurants always have multicultural customers who would like to try delicious food from different countries. Now, I am working at a Chines dip

restaurant

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on weekdays and I am looking for weekend shifts.

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, I can work after 5pm on weekends if your company can offer me 4-5 hours shift every day because I am not able to work longer hours after doing my regular shifts. With my great skills and appropriate experience, I can make my contribution to taking your

restaurant

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to another level as I am a very hard-working and enthusiastic person. I hope to hear a positive response from you. Yours sincerely, Deeksha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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