traffic congestion is becoming increasingly problematic in major cities. what solutions can ou suggest to help solve the problem?

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These days, traffic blockage is considered
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a worrying concern in major cities.
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over population
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in big cities many
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usually use their personal vehicle. Many of them believe that public
transportation
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is harder than driving in traffic jams. In
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essay, I will discuss helpful solutions for decreasing congestion. First of all, using public
transportation
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is a clear solution to
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problem.
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, many
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are not comfortable
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they are using it. So, the
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should have
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plan for
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situation.
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can make available more new vehicles in society.
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, they can rearrange seats in buses and subways for making more seats.
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, having a suitable air conditioner and clean space can attract
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's attention
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using public
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.
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, the
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can
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people
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about the advantages of using public
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.
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, by advertising they can show that
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can save
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time by using it.
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, it can show that
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people
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using it, they can do another activity like reading a book until they get to their destination. It is
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important to consider that public
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has reasonable
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, too. If it will be expensive, it would not be acceptable
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society. It is clear to me that, many
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prefer to use their individual cars because they feel more comfortable. So, the
government
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should make public
transportation
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as comfortable as their cars. Maybe, it takes a couple of years for achieving
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plan to decrease traffic congestion but it will have positive side effects on the environment and society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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