Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mrs Barertt, My name is Maninder kaur.I am writing
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newspaper on 25
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.I firmly believe that my educational background will make me
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candidate for the job. I am currently a
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student at loyalist college . I have done my nursing diploma from
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as well as
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have
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service worker diploma from
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want to let you know that
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can help you
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any kind of house
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related
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have six months
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as
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support worker at
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residence where
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cooked food
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