The two line graphs compare the percentage of houses which owned electrical appliances and how much time of housework which was costed in households in a specific country from 1920 to 2019.
The two-line graphs illustrate the percentage of households that had electrical appliances and how much time of
housework
which amounted to households in a particular region from 1920 to 2019.
To begin
with, in 1920 only 2 per cent
of people used refrigerators
while
30 per cent
used vacuum
cleaners, and 40 per cent
used washing machines. The number of hours
spent on housework
was 50 hours
per week
. In 1940, the usage of refrigerators
increased to 55% as compared to the vacuum
cleaner and washing machine
represented Fix the agreement mistake
machines
at
60% and 50%. In the same Change preposition
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year
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number
of Change the article
the number
hours
per week
for housework
decreased to 35 hours
.
Furthermore
, in 1960 the fraction of usage for washing machine and vacuum
cleaner were the same in contrast
to the
refrigerator. 20 Correct article usage
apply
hours
a week
was allocated for cleaning. In 1980 a decrease in the percentage use of washing machines was noted as compared to vacuum
cleaners and refrigerators
. About 15 hours
per week
was utilized for housework
.
Lastly
, in the year 2000 to 2019, 100 per cent
of households had refrigerators
and vacuum
cleaners in comparison with washing machines 71 per cent
. There was a decline in number of hours
spent on housework
from 15 hours
to 11 hours
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, cent, refrigerators, vacuum, hours, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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