A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, •explain what you would like to talk about • say why students would be interested in your job • suggest a possible date and time for the talk

Dear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing

this

letter to tell you that

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am

intrested

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interested

in your college program and want to talk about some

system

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of banking and the job opportunity in

bank

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the bank

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. I work in

a

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National Bank of India as a Deputy

Menager

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manager

. Few

survays

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surveys

get me that information that many

of

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apply

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youngesters

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youngsters

do not aware about the banking system and in which posts they will work in the bank. If you give me

the

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permission,

i

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would love to share knowledge of

this

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these

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things

to

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students. I must say if they knowing that how

intresting

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interesting

this

job is they will definitely love to work in

this

field

as well as

it will be easy for them to

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net banking and

also

teach their parents and relatives.

Thus

, more and more people get information about it and it is

tottaly

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totally

beneficial for them.

Moreover

, I must say I am available

on

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next week because my holidays are only for

week

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a week

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.

Therefore

,

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any

convinient

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convenient

time of

yours

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we arranged

this

meeting because after one week my vacation is finished and it is hard for me to get

spare

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time. So, If you are

in to

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this

kindly let me know. Yours faithfully, Trishana Iyer.