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A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, •explain what you would like to talk about • say why students would be interested in your job • suggest a possible date and time for the talk

#college #people #job #students #work #•explain #date #time #talk
Dear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing
this
 letter to tell you that
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I
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 am
intrested
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interested
 in your college program and want to talk about some
system
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 of banking and the job opportunity in
bank
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the bank
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. I work in
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the
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 National Bank of India as a Deputy
Menager
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manager
. Few
survays
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surveys
 get me that information that many
of
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youngesters
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youngsters
 do not aware about the banking system and in which posts they will work in the bank. If you give me
the
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permission,
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 would love to share knowledge of
this
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these
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 things
to
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 students. I must say if they knowing that how
intresting
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interesting
this
 job is they will definitely love to work in
this
 field
as well as
 it will be easy for them to
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 net banking and
also
 teach their parents and relatives.
Thus
, more and more people get information about it and it is
tottaly
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totally
 beneficial for them.
Moreover
, I must say I am available
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next week because my holidays are only for
week
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a week
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.
Therefore
,
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 any
convinient
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convenient
 time of
yours
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 we arranged
this
 meeting because after one week my vacation is finished and it is hard for me to get
spare
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 time. So, If you are
in to
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this
 kindly let me know. Yours faithfully, Trishana Iyer.
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