The government spend about 220 million (poundsterling) a year supporting museums and galleries in the UK, and a similar amount subsiding the visual and perfoming arts. This is a huge sum to spend on minority interest, and the money would be better spent on more important things. It should be up to the people who enjoy cultural attractions to pay for them. What are your views?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Subsidize
  • Heritage
  • Accessibility
  • Self-sustaining
  • Cultural hub
  • Philanthropy
  • State patronage
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Cultural literacy
  • Public endowment
  • Economic multiplier
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