Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

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Dear Martha, How have you been recently ? Hope everything is going on well your end. I came to know that you have a plan to move to a new house in a short time. I cannot wait to see the new house. Lately, your father called me and told me, about your plan to move in next week, and because of his job he can not help you with moving. As I have no job duties next Tuesday and Thursday, I can help you with packing and will bring food for you as it will be messy. As your new home is not far from my location, I will help you with unboxing too. You know that I am good with decoration ideas, leave that to me. I will manage that. I will make your house

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. Have you hired any technician for that or should I do that ? Do not forget to revert me back. I am as excited as you to see you in your new accommodation. See you soon ! Yours lovingly, Jen

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task response

Ensure that the response adequately addresses all aspects of the task prompt, including offering to help with the move, explaining how help will be provided, and asking questions about the new house.

coherence and cohesion

Organize the letter with clear paragraph breaks and focus on maintaining a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. Also, use appropriate greeting and closing expressions.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

189 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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