You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, -Explain that you would like to apply for the job -Give some details of any relevant experience that you have -Specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Sir, I

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to inform you of my interest in the recently advertised

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in your local restaurant. I would like to apply for

this

job

because I believe I

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the criteria listed for the

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, considering that the

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I have an unadulterated experience in hotel management where I worked as a chef and I have good experience in food handling which I feel will be required in the advertised offer.

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, I would appreciate it if I could be placed on weekends specifically morning shifts, because it will enable me to go ADD THE PARTICLE to go It appears that the verb go should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.

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about my school programmes on weekdays FIX THE AGREEMENT MISTAKE weekdays It seems that

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as a

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student. Looking forward to hearing from you soon Thank you Yours Faithfully Anthonia

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

214 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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