The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of elec city in 2014. Summa se the information by selec g and reporting the main featu s, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of elec city in 2014.

Summa se the information by selec g and reporting the main featu s, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrates the list of states that are leaders in the
production
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and
consumption
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of
electricity
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during
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2014.
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, it is possible to say that China was among the leaders in terms of
consumption
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and
production
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during a given period.
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the same period of time, the Republic of Korea was the country with the least
level
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of
production
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and supply of
electricity
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with 485.1 and 449.5 billion kilowatts respectively.
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data, the second and the third
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countries are the United States and Russia. It can be noted that the
level
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of
production
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and
consumption
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of
electricity
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in Russia is almost the same, but the amount of produced energy is higher. The fourth and the fifth ranks in the list are taken by Japan and India, where the
production
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of
electricity
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is 936.2 and 871 billion kWh
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. In terms of Canada, France and Brazil, there is a higher amount of produced
electricity
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than the
level
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of
consumption
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among residents.
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in Germany the situation is a bit different: the
level
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of
consumption
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is 582.5
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the amount of produced energy is 526.6.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, electricity, level with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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