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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summa se the info ation selecting and repo ing the main features, and make compa ons e relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summa se the info ation selecting and repo ing the main features, and make compa ons e relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the ratio of different types of
households
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 in two countries: England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, it is possible to say that in a given period the percentage of rented
households
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 gradually decreased from approximately 77% in 1918 to 31 % in 2001 and showed a slight increase to 5% in 2011. At the same period of time, the amount of
households
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 in owned
accommodation
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 illustrates an increase from 1918 to 2001 and
then
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 a decrease in 2011.
According to
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 data,
households
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 in rented
accommodation
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 in 1918 showed the highest percentage during a given period which was approximately 77%. Over the next years,
this
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 value fall down to 69% in 1939 and in 1953 was almost the same. In terms of
households
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 in owned
accommodation
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, from 1918 to 2001 there was an upward trend showing an increase from 23% in 1918 up to 69 % in 2011.
Nevertheless
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, in 2011 there was a 5% decrease compared with the previous ten years. In 1971 the percentage of
households
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 owning and renting
accommodation
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 was at the same value of 50%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Housing tenure
  • Owned accommodation
  • Rented accommodation
  • Percentage
  • Trend
  • Shift in ownership
  • Historical context
  • Housing market
  • Housing policy
  • Post-war
  • Property ladder
  • Economic factors
  • Demographic changes
  • Mortgages
  • Real estate
  • Housing bubble
  • Buy-to-let
  • Housing affordability
  • Social housing
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