The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following maps demonstrate the exciting ground floor
plan
of a house and presented the Use synonyms
plan
for Use synonyms
future
building work. Use synonyms
Overall
, the internal wall in the living Linking Words
room
got removed and the internal doors got placed in the Use synonyms
kitchen
.
At first glance, the living Use synonyms
room
looks bigger than it is in the current Use synonyms
plan
because the internal door that divided the hall and the Use synonyms
room
got removed. Use synonyms
Then
, we can see that the stairs in the proposed version are replaced in the place where in the present Linking Words
plan
are two internal doors. These two internal doors will be installed in the Use synonyms
kitchen
in the Use synonyms
future
Use synonyms
plan
.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
in addition
to the Linking Words
kitchen
will be put the Use synonyms
kitchen
furniture. There will be just one wall in the proposed Use synonyms
plan
Use synonyms
while
in the existing Linking Words
plan
, there are 2 of them. In the currently functioning Use synonyms
plan
, there is a storage under the stairs, in the Use synonyms
future
, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
room
will not be in Use synonyms
this
house at all. Linking Words
To sum up
, in the Linking Words
plan
for Use synonyms
future
changes, a lot of things got removed and Use synonyms
living
Correct article usage
the living
room
and the Use synonyms
kitchen
got slightly bigger.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, future, room, kitchen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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