The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following maps demonstrate the exciting ground floor
plan
of a house and presented the plan
for future
building work. Overall
, the internal wall in the living room
got removed and the internal doors got placed in the kitchen
.
At first glance, the living room
looks bigger than it is in the current plan
because the internal door that divided the hall and the room
got removed. Then
, we can see that the stairs in the proposed version are replaced in the place where in the present plan
are two internal doors. These two internal doors will be installed in the kitchen
in the future
plan
.
Furthermore
, in addition
to the kitchen
will be put the kitchen
furniture. There will be just one wall in the proposed plan
while
in the existing plan
, there are 2 of them. In the currently functioning plan
, there is a storage under the stairs, in the future
, this
room
will not be in this
house at all. To sum up
, in the plan
for future
changes, a lot of things got removed and living
Correct article usage
the living
room
and the kitchen
got slightly bigger.Submitted by maat2074 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, future, room, kitchen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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