The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The flowchart demonstrates how a hydroelectric station works to produce electricity.
Overall
, the process distributes into 2 primary day and night stages, beginning with water
flowing from the higher reservoir to the generator and ending with the transmission of electricity to the national grid.
The first and most important component of this
machine is a generator, which is used for producing energy. Following that are turbines that are responsible for operating the generator and pumping water
into the high-level reservoir and an intake gate is attached under the dam to regulate the flow of water
. Finally
, all the electricity is transferred to the national grid through power
lines that are connected to the power
producer.
In the daytime, the intake valve opens, allowing water
to flow for the turbines to rotate, which allows the energy to be produced, and then
the water
flows into a low-level reservoir. In the other half of the day, the water
is pumped back to its start by the motors. Moreover
, the intake is closed during this
time period. Finally
, all the power
is transmitted through power
lines to the national grid.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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