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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure indicates the largest number of populations of
three
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countries
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 in the world.
According to
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 the table, the populations increased in all
three
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countries
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 since 2017. China has the highest
population
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 among the
three
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countries
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 at 1.415 billion. Even though
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 the
population
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 increased by 0.39% since 2017 and
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 the smallest proportion among the
three
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 counties. There are 151
people
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 per
square
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 kilometre and there are 58% of
people
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 in urban areas. Those are the second-highest number in the
three
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 counties, respectively. China is the biggest country in the
three
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countries
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 at 9.388
million
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square
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 kilometres. The second highest
population
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 is hit in India at 1.354 billion. They increased the
population
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 by 1.11% since 2017 and
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 the highest rise in the
three
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 counties.
Furthermore
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, India has the highest density among the
three
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countries
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. The urban
population
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 is only 32% and
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 the smallest proportion. India is the smallest country at 2.973
million
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square
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 kilometres. America has the smallest number of
people
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 in the
three
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countries
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 at 327
million
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. The
population
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 has risen up by 0.71%.
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, their density is the lowest at 36
people
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 per
square
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 kilometre.
However
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, the urban
population
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 is the largest at 83% among the
three
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countries
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. The US is the second largest country at 9.147
million
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square
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 kilometres.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, countries, population, people, square, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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