The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure indicates the largest number of populations of
three
countries
in the world.
According to
the table, the populations increased in all
three
countries
since 2017. China has the highest
population
among the
three
countries
at 1.415 billion. Even though
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the
population
increased by 0.39% since 2017 and
that is
the smallest proportion among the
three
counties. There are 151
people
per
square
kilometre and there are 58% of
people
in urban areas. Those are the second-highest number in the
three
counties, respectively. China is the biggest country in the
three
countries
at 9.388
million
square
kilometres. The second highest
population
is hit in India at 1.354 billion. They increased the
population
by 1.11% since 2017 and
that is
the highest rise in the
three
counties.
Furthermore
, India has the highest density among the
three
countries
. The urban
population
is only 32% and
that is
the smallest proportion. India is the smallest country at 2.973
million
square
kilometres. America has the smallest number of
people
in the
three
countries
at 327
million
. The
population
has risen up by 0.71%.
Moreover
, their density is the lowest at 36
people
per
square
kilometre.
However
, the urban
population
is the largest at 83% among the
three
countries
. The US is the second largest country at 9.147
million
square
kilometres.
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