The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the provided chart reveals the survey result of people’s habits of buying and drinking
coffee
and tea throughout five Australian cities.
Overall
, more than half the population in all cities except
Adelaide
have preferred to go to a cafe for
coffee
or tea,
while
buying instant
coffee
was
also
popular and buying fresh
coffee
generally
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less common. Looking first of all at going to cafes, it was most characteristic of Melbourne and Hobart at 64% and 63%, respectively. Sydney was comparably high at just over 60%, followed by Brisbane at over 55%, and
finally
Adelaide
at under 50%.
Adelaide
was the only city where people bought more instant
coffee
by a slight margin of 50%. In Hobart, instant
coffee
purchases stood at 54%, ahead of Brisbane at 52%, Melbourne at 48%, and
lastly
Sydney at just over 45%. Stocking up on fresh
coffee
was below 45% for all cities. It was most common in Sydney (44%) and Melbourne (52%). Hobart was next at 39%, and
Adelaide
and Brisbane were much lower and nearly level at around 34%.
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