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the charts below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients

the charts below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients
The pie charts give information about the proportions of the three nutrient groups in given diets, all of which may lead to some health issues if taken in excess.
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 with, dinner occupies the largest proportion in both sodium and saturated fat(43
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),
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 breakfast takes the smallest percentage in these two nutrients with figures of 14
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 respectively. It is particularly noticeable that in added sugar the difference between dinner and breakfast is the lowest in
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 category with a difference of 7
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. Moving to other meals, the proportion of sodium contained in lunch is twice as large as in snacks.
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this
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 figure in snacks is two times that of lunch.
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, the average percentages of saturated fat in lunch and snacks are similar
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. In conclusion, the largest number can be seen in Dinner both in sodium and saturated fat.
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 proportions of nutrients in breakfast.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
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