The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The chart given illustrates the

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based on

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accomodation

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accommodation

owned and rented by each

households

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from 1918 and 2011.

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, the

percentage

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of households owned and rented

are

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inversely proportional

thorughout

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throughout

the year.

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the beginning of the century,

majority

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rented house rather than owning it. Though as time went on, the

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went down, replaced with owned

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accomodation

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accommodation

. Throughout 1918, 1939, 1953, and 1961, most residents in England and Wales rented

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accomodation

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accommodation

with approximately 78, 69, 69, and 59

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percent

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respectively, where just under 45

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percent

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per cent

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of residents who are renting their

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accomodation

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accommodation

. The number of rented

house

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houses

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dropped significantly to a bit over 30

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in 2001.

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, the portions of

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accomodation

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accommodation

owned increased and in the middle of the century, both of the proportions meet at equally 50

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percent

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each. In comparison, the proportions of owned

house

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houses

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in the second half of the century were higher than rented accomodations.

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, both

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percentage

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started to go

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opposite

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the opposite

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rate

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again in 2011.

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