The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The chart given illustrates the
percentage
based on accomodation
owned and rented by each Correct your spelling
accommodation
households
from 1918 and 2011.
Change to a singular noun
household
Overall
, the percentage
of households owned and rented are
inversely proportional Correct subject-verb agreement
is
thorughout
the year. Correct your spelling
throughout
In
the beginning of the century, Change the preposition
At
majority
rented house rather than owning it. Though as time went on, the Correct article usage
the majority
percentage
went down, replaced with owned accomodation
.
Throughout 1918, 1939, 1953, and 1961, most residents in England and Wales rented Correct your spelling
accommodation
accomodation
with approximately 78, 69, 69, and 59 Correct your spelling
accommodation
percent
respectively, where just under 45 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of residents who are renting their Change the spelling
per cent
accomodation
. The number of rented Correct your spelling
accommodation
house
dropped significantly to a bit over 30 Fix the agreement mistake
houses
percent
in 2001. In contrast
, the portions of accomodation
owned increased and in the middle of the century, both of the proportions meet at equally 50 Correct your spelling
accommodation
percent
each.
In comparison, the proportions of owned Change the spelling
per cent
house
in the second half of the century were higher than rented accomodations. Fix the agreement mistake
houses
However
, both percentage
started to go Change to a plural noun
percentages
on
Change preposition
at
opposite
Correct article usage
the opposite
rate
again in 2011.Fix the agreement mistake
rates
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