The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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information about the utilization of

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from

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report in the USA since 1980 and estimation futures until 2030.

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petrol

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and

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fuel

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mostly

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used in the past, and

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future uses will increase steadily, despite some

fluctuated

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in the past,

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coal same

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petrol

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uses.

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uses

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remained stable,

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some will increase uses

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tiny portion. In the past USA, started

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petrol

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energy

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at around 35

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in 1980, and significantly declined to just

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30

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in 1985, and made some fluctuations next 20

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between around 30

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and about 40

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. The coal

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used

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stable 15

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ago and climbed to just over 20% in 1995 before slightly

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a tiny percentage uses in 2007,

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steadily increased

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around 22% in 2013. On

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hand, nuclear made up a tiny portion

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of

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used in 2005 and remained relatively next 7

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started

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4

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in 1980 and levelled off for 10

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and declined

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3

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in 1995,

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slightly increased until 2010. Hydropower

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remined

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relatively at begun and until 1990 and fluctuated between 1990 and 2010. In the future USA,

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uses

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is expected steadily increase until to just under 50

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in 2030. Coal

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use will start at 21

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in 2020,

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dramatically to 30

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in 2030. To be the fact that nuclear and solar/wind

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uses will remain relatively the first consecutive

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in the future before they are slightly increased

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1 unit in 2030,

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will not make any difference use

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energy

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comparing

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to the

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past

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