You are a student at a University in the UK. You have recently lost your University ID Card. Write to the local police station giving details of: who are you? what happened? Ask to record your details so that you can apply a new ID card.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about a lost student identification

card

. My name is Kanchan Bhatia, I am living in the United Kingdom for the past 3 years. I basically migrating from India.

However

, I was travelling to my college, XYZ University of Peterborough.

Last

Monday, I was travelling to my college, and after reaching, when I was told to punch the

card

at the main gate. I found that I have no identification

card

, It seems to me that, I forget on the bus.

Apart from

this

, without it, I am not able to attend classes,

also

cannot enter into university.

Thus

, my studies are affected and next month I have exams too. I would like to request you enter my details into your system so that I can apply for a fresh

card

. I have an Indian passport issued by the Indian government, the passport number is R543637 and my date of birth is 13/5/1009. Hopefully, you will be considered my request. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Kanchan Bhatia

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