The graph below shows the population figures for different type of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.

The graph below shows the population  figures for different type of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.
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The chart depicts, over 6 years, the 4 electronics
games
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as global sales. From an
overall
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perspective, the years taken into consideration start with the period time of
year
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2000 to end in 2006.
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, as has already been mentioned, the cases of digital
games
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are 4, namely Mobile phone, Online, Console and Handheld.
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with, the first
year
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illustrates, the presence of only 2
games
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, or rather 6% for the console and 11% for handheld. Following, the fractions for the next
year
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are still quite similar, but with the addition of another case, which is "online" with a lower fee by 0.1%.
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, the
year
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2002 presents the previous threes, plus another one. The cases of Online and Mobile report the same results by 1%, whilst the Handheld will increase, passing from a fraction of 13% to 16% and at the same time, Console will drop its interest. Over the rest of the years, as it is visible clearly, the only cases that will grow are Handled, Online and Mobile,
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the Console is a continuity of up and down.
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, with what has already been analysed and compared, it's relevant to highlight the higher percentage of use the digital
games
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, that are increasing day by day .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words games, year with synonyms.
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