Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that males and females possess distinctive qualities so
that
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some
jobs
suit
men
better whilst others suit
women
better. From my perspective e, I totally disagree with that view.
This
essay will discuss my viewpoint with detailed reasons and relevant examples. First of all, no
intelligence
is proven to be gender specific. In the past,
men
were found to be outnumbering
women
in certain fields, notably the STEM (science, technology, engineering and math) subjects. one that suggests
men
are more suitable for performing STEM-related
jobs
than
women
due to
the stereotypical thinking about the disparity in certain types of
intelligence
,
such
as logical-mathematical
intelligence
. But over time,
women
have demonstrated their intellectual capability and strength in the aforementioned fields,
such
as Madame Curie, Annie Easley, Zhenyi Wang, and Youyou Tu. It can be inferred that
intelligence
is a gender-natural concept
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and that
men
and
women
can do equally well in the seemingly manly fields.
Secondly
, with the development of machines,
men
's advantages in Physical strength will gradually disappear, which means that heavy physical work
that is
only suitable for
men
will gradually disappear. In the past, people needed to use
hands
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and spades to dig the mine and to move things by themselves. But now, we use excavators and trucks. In the future, we will only sit in front of the computer screen and tap the keyboard, and these things will all be solved. It is obvious that
women
can do
as well as
men
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because strong physical strength is no longer necessary.
Thirdly
,
men
can work as patiently as
women
. It is a well-known and widely lamented stereotype that most
men
are more irritated than
women
, and
therefore
men
are not suitable
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job
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that require patience,
such
as
nurse
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.
However
, it has nothing to do with the qualities of
men
, it is closely related to their education. Most parents do not treat boys with the same tenderness as
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girls when they educate their children and
therefore
they developed
this
personality when they were young. With the improvement of educational concepts,
this
situation has changed.
According to
the statistics, since 1970, the number of
men
in nursing has risen steadily with
men
making up approximately 12% of registered nurses in 2020.
This
proves that
men
are capable of
jobs
that require patience.
As
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a
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conclusion, in today’s world
women
and
men
can
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of doing any
jobs
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. Excluding a male or a female from a certain profession because of his or her gender doesn't have any logical reason. Believing a gender is not
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suitable for a certain job is just an out fashioned thought. There is no limitation for
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men
and
women
in the job market except prejudice.
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  • gender roles
  • inherent qualities
  • social dynamics
  • merit-based selection
  • advancements in technology
  • levelled the playing field
  • gender stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • physical differences
  • workplace
  • evolving
  • traditional view
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