Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is believed that the

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contribution to the

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like music and theatre by the

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is unnecessary.

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, the

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capital must be utilized in public services rather than art. I partially agreed regarding the notion as

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an investment

must be made in Both sectors. Embarking with the reasons why the

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should invest in

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public

services. The prime reason is

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improvement

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nation. To

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it the

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invest capital in social welfare, there will be great chances of improvement .Social

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welfare

is like providing better conditions to live.

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, in India, the people of Bihar state who come from a deprived section

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by the.

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in the covid section. Accommodations

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and diet were provided by the famous people of India.

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, but not least inducement is prosperity  of country. If the individuals of reason are healthy and wealthy, there will be

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in the economy of

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. Despite

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the aforementioned outcomes , There are some benefits engage with the

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. The

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and foremost benefit is

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in the knowledge about culture. The

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investment in

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is beneficial to society, as they know about the traditional culture which

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shown in the cinema, the people come to know about their ancestors.

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, there is another important inducement is entertainment. Music and cinema are used for the purpose of enjoyment many individuals love to see Movies and listen to music in their leisure time.

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, the investment of capital in the

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by the

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is not a waste of

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.

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,

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there are some benefits of investing

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by the

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in

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like for entertainment.

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, the merits of contributing

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in

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public services cannot be overlooked.