the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australia cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares the proposition of city dwellers in Australian regions in terms of buying and drinking
coffee
and tea
which are the habits in several cities.
Overall
, the figures of percentage in
several Change preposition
apply
residents
who had habits for went
to a café for Wrong verb form
going
coffee
or tea
, bought
fresh and Correct word choice
and bought
instant
coffee
in the last
4 weeks
. Went to a café was chosen by citizens rather than buying fresh coffee
and instant
coffee
. It was the habits in the last
4 weeks
.
As a graph shows, the people who went to café
for Correct article usage
a café
coffee
or tea
for the last
4 weeks
had a great proportion in all of the regions in America. The largest proportions were in Melbourne, which had approximately 65% and followed by Hobart then
Sydney
around 60%. The percentage of instant
coffee
in the last
4 weeks
in five cities were
more fall Correct subject-verb agreement
was
interested
Replace the word
interesting
by
Change preposition
apply
residents
, such
as Sydney
. Sydney
has 45% bought instant
coffee
, compared to Brisbane which was the great, around 50%. Hobart has almost 55% residents
who bought Change preposition
of residents
instant
coffee
. Fresh coffee
was the little one who was interested in buying fresh coffee
for the last
4 weeks
in all part
. In Brisbane, 35% of Fix the agreement mistake
parts
residents
went to get fresh coffee
. Also
, Sydney
was the bigger percentage that bought fresh coffee
.
At the end
of the
several cities in America, Correct article usage
apply
residents
chose to go to a cafe for coffee
or tea
in the last
4 weeks
. While
,
the figures show, some people just want to buy fresh Remove the comma
apply
coffee
in the last
4 weeks
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