the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australia cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart compares the proposition of city dwellers in Australian regions in terms of buying and drinking

coffee

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and

tea

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which are the habits in several cities.

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, the figures of percentage

in

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several

residents

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who had habits for

went

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to a café for

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or

tea

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,

bought

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and bought

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fresh and

instant

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coffee

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in the

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4

weeks

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. Went to a café was chosen by citizens rather than buying fresh

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and

instant

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coffee

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. It was the habits in the

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. As a graph shows, the people who went to

café

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a café

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for

coffee

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or

tea

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for the

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4

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had a great proportion in all of the regions in America. The largest proportions were in Melbourne, which had approximately 65% and followed by Hobart

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Sydney

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around 60%. The percentage of

instant

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coffee

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in the

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4

weeks

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in five cities

were

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more fall

interested

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by

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residents

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as

Sydney

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.

Sydney

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has 45% bought

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coffee

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, compared to Brisbane which was the great, around 50%. Hobart has almost 55%

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residents

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of residents

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who bought

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coffee

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. Fresh

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was the little one who was interested in buying fresh

coffee

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for the

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in all

part

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. In Brisbane, 35% of

residents

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went to get fresh

coffee

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.

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,

Sydney

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was the bigger percentage that bought fresh

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of

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several cities in America,

residents

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chose to go to a cafe for

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or

tea

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in the

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4

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apply

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the figures show, some people just want to buy fresh

coffee

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in the

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4

weeks

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.