The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant. WRITE AT LEAST 150 WORDS

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

WRITE AT LEAST 150 WORDS
The bar chart represents the classification of various income groups in cities
as well as
regional centres of Australia.
Overall
, from the given data it can be observed that there are 4 categories of class
that
is
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are
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low, lower
middle
,
middle
and high.
However
, more percentage of the population
have
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an average income
that is
higher than 70,000 in cities compared to regional centres.
Furthermore
, regional centres include the highest fragment of
lower
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the lower
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middle
class who earns 40,000 - 70,000$ yearly
whereas
, 22
percent
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per cent
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of the crowd have 40,000 or
less
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earnings.
Moreover
, 20% and 15% of people have income greater than or equal to $120,000 in both areas respectively.
Next,
urban areas have
30
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% proportion of individuals who earn salaries between $40,000-70,000 and they come under the category of lower
middle
.
In addition
to the other categories in the city area, the population earning nearly $40,000 are the least, which stands at 13%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words middle with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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