You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say where you think you left the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

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letter regarding a matter which concerns me greatly. Recently I attended a meeting at your eminent hotel,

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, I forgot some documents in the conference hall where the meeting took place.As far as I can recall, I left them in the cafeteria section of the hall. These documents are of uttermost significance for the distinguished company I represent because they contain not only extensive information about our future plans and goals but

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are of confidential nature.

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, they can prove to be beneficial for our competitors in the market and can have devastating effects on our reputation. I request you to look for these documents at the earliest and inform me via phone call .

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, kindly keep them in a safe place until I come to get them personally as I am the authorized personnel. Thank you in anticipation Your's faithfully Ahmad Hassan Nadeem

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.

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It is more important for a building to be functional than beautiful. Architects should not worry about designing buildings as works of art. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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