you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mister Remdane, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am really interested in the opportunity of working abroad that you mentioned during the

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meeting. I would like you to know that I and a good fit for

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position since I have already had the necessary experience. As you know, I have been working for

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company for 10 years, now. So, I would like to benefit from the offer in order to gain more experience, and I am quite sure that I will add more value to the head office, using my previous knowledge. As for my present job, I ensure you that all my work will be done before I get promoted.

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, I can handle any situation here

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I am there. I am asking for your help to talk well of me and arrange an interview. I am looking forward to hearing from you. yours faithfully, Faten Daas

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

professional advancement
cross-cultural collaboration
headquarters/ head office
global perspective
remote work
temporary assignment
team dynamics
networking opportunities
cultural immersion
succession planning
collaborative tools
time zone coordination
corporate hierarchy
relocation logistics
work-life balance
multinational environment

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