The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the cycle of how
glass
is reused. It portrays different steps involved in the process of glass
recycling.
Overall
, the whole procedure forms a circle because it starts at the same point where it ends. When the life of a glass
bottle or any glass made
material comes to an end Add a hyphen
glass-made
that is
when the life of another glass
product starts.
The whole manufacturing part is done at a treatment plant. All glass
bottles and other glass made
items are collected together from Add a hyphen
glass-made
recycle
bins and taken to treatment plants. At the treatment facility Change the verb form
recycling
firstly
, they are disinfected. Then
they are pulverised and turned to a liquid form. Finally
they are reshaped into bottles and sent back to shops.
In conclusion, the process of recycling Add a comma
,Finally
glass
is fairly simple and effective. It does not involve any overly complicated steps and it can be accomplished with merely 5 steps.Submitted by tanisha.tanzia on
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