Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. What are the causes? Suggest some measures to reduce traffic in big cities.

It is certainly true that
traffic
jams
has
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become a major issue in many major urban
areas
around the world. There are several reasons for
traffic
congestion
however
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,however
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, I would like to recommend some steps to
adressing
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addressing
this
problem. On the one hand, the primary
reasons
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reason
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why main
cities
woruldwide
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worldwide
struggle with
traffic
jams
is
increase
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the increase
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the
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number of vehicles in
cities
.
This
is because many
people
from rural
areas
move to urban
areas
in order to find
a
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better job
opportunity
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opportunities
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,education ,and healthcare which
this
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can
leads
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to
growth
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the growth
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of
population
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the population
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in
cities
. Poor public
transport
is another reason for
traffic
jams
.
This
is
due to
the fact that
,
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apply
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the
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public
transport
often
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slow and overcrowding , which
this
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can discourage
people
to take it, and
then
people
prefer to rely on their cars.
On the other hand
, there are diverse measures
can
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that can
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taken
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by the governments to mitigate the high-volume
traffic
. The first effective measure, the authorities can motivate
the
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private companies and factories to move to countryside
areas
, which
this
step can create better living standards in rural
areas
namely, jobs, education,
healthcare
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and healthcare
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.
Therefore
,
this
step can discourage
people
to migrate to
cities
,
then
decrease the
inhabitants
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number of inhabitants
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in
cities
and reduce the
traffic
jams
. The second solution,
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is the
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the
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that
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lawmakers should make improvements in public
transport
such
as
,
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trains, buses, and subways by
make
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it
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them
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faster and less crowded, which
this
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apply
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can
leads
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lead
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to incentive individuals to take public
transport
instead
of their cars.
Consequently
, cutting the number of cars
in
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our roads and
easy
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ease
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the
traffic
. In conclusion, there are different causes of
traffic
congestion including,
increase
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an increase
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the
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population in urban
areas
,
poor
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and poor
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public
transport
,
however
,
the
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they
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are some
solution
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solutions
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to tackle
this
issue
such
as
,
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apply
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incentive the private companies to move to
agriculture
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areas
,
enhance
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enhancing
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the quality of public
transport
.
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