Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Elizabeth, It’s so nice to hear from you, how have you been? It’s been
such
a long time since we saw each other at BridgePark Concerts. Congratulations on being accepted to study at Parkwell University. You know I got my bachelor’s degree in economics at Parkwell and I’ve so many unforgettable memories there. Parkwell has an amazing dormitory with cosy rooms and a variety of amenities. I stayed in one of the rooms where we had even en suite laundry. You should visit the dormitory before searching for other places. The dormitory is located within West Campus and the registration manager, Ms. Dorothy, has an office on the 1st floor. She loves to help new students and I’m sure you’ll love her. If you want to rent a house or a flat, please keep in mind that the rents in that area are higher than in other parts of the city because landlords know that it’s a popular student region. Students usually don’t want to spend time looking at other areas so they end up paying a higher rate. That’s why I suggest that you should look at the places in the other neighbourhoods as well. Looking forward to hearing from you! Best wishes, Gozde
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dormitories
  • rental agreements
  • house-hunting
  • budgeting
  • commute
  • utilities
  • security deposit
  • lease
  • proximity
  • amenities
  • landlord
  • tenant rights
  • real estate agent
  • furnished/unfurnished
  • flatmates
  • on-campus/off-campus living
  • viewings
  • public transportation
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