IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

16.The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Today, it is well known that artificial
intelligence
Use synonyms
 (AI) machines are critical in many fields.
However
Linking Words
, whether they contribute to the development of the future of mankind or pose a danger to mankind is still debated. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on both views and present my own position on the issue. On the one hand, people are afraid of
robots
Use synonyms
due to
Linking Words
 a large number of failures. In fact, it is sometimes impossible to explain and understand the robot's behaviour, so engineers cannot fully trust the machine.
For example
Linking Words
, explaining AI predictions in high-stakes fields like medicine is critical because it helps humans rely on those predictions. That said if people trust the machines, when the
robots
Use synonyms
 malfunction, it could lead to false cancer detections. I acknowledge these serious concerns about bots, but I still believe that a well-organized pipeline of experts and AI will minimize failures.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, we already use
robots
Use synonyms
 in our daily life. As long as we use personal computers, we use artificial
intelligence
Use synonyms
 applications unconsciously.
For example
Linking Words
, weather forecasts are based on artificial
intelligence
Use synonyms
, and
in addition
Linking Words
, product recommendations are
also
Linking Words
 based on artificial
intelligence
Use synonyms
. Plus, our smartphones are
robots
Use synonyms
 that help us find our geographic location, calculate the best path, and blur the background in our portrait photos. I'm a computer vision engineer, so I see how these applications can simplify our lives. In conclusion, I would say that there are some public concerns about machines,
such
Linking Words
 as the low level of AI interpretation.
However
Linking Words
,
robots
Use synonyms
 have undoubtedly improved our lives through the application of artificial
intelligence
Use synonyms
, which in my opinion will develop the future of humanity.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
What to do next:
Look at other essays: