the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. SUmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. SUmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the percentage of
coffee
and tea consumption habits in five parts of cities in Australia,
Sydney
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
. The information is categorized into three types, bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
four weeks, bought
instant
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks, and went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
four weeks, and
it is clear that
more than half the population in all cities except
Adelaide
went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea,
while
buying
instant
coffee
was
also
popular, and buying fresh
coffee
was generally less common. Looking first of all at going to cafes, it was most characteristic of
Melbourne
and
Hobart
at 64% and 63%, respectively.
Sydney
was comparably high at just over 60%, followed by
Brisbane
at over 55%, and
finally
Adelaide
at under 50%.
Adelaide
was the only city where people bought more
instant
coffee
by a slight margin (50%). In
Hobart
,
instant
coffee
purchases stood at 54%, ahead of
Brisbane
at 52%,
Melbourne
at 48% and
lastly
Sydney
(just over 45%). Stocking up on fresh
coffee
was below 45% for all cities. It was most common in
Sydney
(44%) and
Melbourne
(42%).
Hobart
was next at 39%, and
Adelaide
and
Brisbane
were much lower and nearly level at around 34%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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