the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. SUmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. SUmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the percentage of
coffee
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and tea consumption habits in five parts of cities in Australia,
Sydney
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Melbourne
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,
Brisbane
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,
Adelaide
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, and
Hobart
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. The information is categorized into three types, bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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four weeks, bought
instant
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coffee
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in the
last
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4 weeks, and went to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea in the
last
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four weeks, and
it is clear that
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more than half the population in all cities except
Adelaide
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went to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea,
while
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buying
instant
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coffee
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was
also
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popular, and buying fresh
coffee
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was generally less common. Looking first of all at going to cafes, it was most characteristic of
Melbourne
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and
Hobart
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at 64% and 63%, respectively.
Sydney
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was comparably high at just over 60%, followed by
Brisbane
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at over 55%, and
finally
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Adelaide
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at under 50%.
Adelaide
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was the only city where people bought more
instant
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coffee
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by a slight margin (50%). In
Hobart
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,
instant
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coffee
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purchases stood at 54%, ahead of
Brisbane
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at 52%,
Melbourne
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at 48% and
lastly
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Sydney
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(just over 45%). Stocking up on fresh
coffee
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was below 45% for all cities. It was most common in
Sydney
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(44%) and
Melbourne
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(42%).
Hobart
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was next at 39%, and
Adelaide
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and
Brisbane
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were much lower and nearly level at around 34%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, hobart, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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