The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates different hobbies of buying and drinking
coffee
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and tea in Australian cities.
It is clear that
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the largest proportion of cities which had the habit of people who went to a cafe for a drink in the
last
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4
weeks
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was Melbourne,
while
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the figure for buying fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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4 years was the least proportion in Brisbane. From the table,Melbourne had the biggest proportion which reached almost 64% about going to a cafe for a drink in the
last
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4
weeks
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,
while
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Sydney and Hobart had familiar dates in
this
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hobby,with 61% and 62% respectively.At
this
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point, figures for Brisbane and Adelaide were under 55%,no more than 49%. It can be seen that Hobart had the largest rate which got 54% in the hobby about people about instant
coffee
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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and the other four cities had the familiar proportions from 45% to 52%.But Brisbane and Adelaide were the minimum two ratios about people who bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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,which was no more than 35%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, weeks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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