The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below provides information about how to transform
cocoa
beans
into various products.
It is also
noticeable that there are 3 steps in the development of cocoa
beans
and it takes a lot of time and equipment; moreover
, some stages require professional skills.
A closer look at the graph reveals the process starts with picking whole cocoa
beans
. Next,
the total beans
are shelled and drying, and after that pressing the cocoa
bean into the cocoa
liquor. Following
this
, bifurcation in the production process begins, half of the cocoa
liquor goes through the further
pressing step while
another half encounters further
refining. The further
pressing stage produces two products cocoa
cake and cocoa
, the cocoa
cake is grided by machine or hand, and converted into cocoa
powder, hence
, it is already used and delivered to customers.
The cocoa
is not only sent to the industry cakes drink and then
put in the cocoa
powder but also
transform into industrial chocolate from the further
refining process produced. In addition
, it is added sugar and goes through further
processing, changing into finished chocolate products.Submitted by caelumz1121 on
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