The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below provides information about how to transform
cocoa
Use synonyms
beans
into various products.
It is Use synonyms
also
noticeable that there are 3 steps in the development of Linking Words
cocoa
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beans
and it takes a lot of time and equipment; Use synonyms
moreover
, some stages require professional skills.
A closer look at the graph reveals the process starts with picking whole Linking Words
cocoa
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beans
. Use synonyms
Next,
the total Linking Words
beans
are shelled and drying, and after that pressing the Use synonyms
cocoa
bean into the Use synonyms
cocoa
liquor. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, bifurcation in the production process begins, half of the Linking Words
cocoa
liquor goes through the Use synonyms
further
pressing step Linking Words
while
another half encounters Linking Words
further
refining. The Linking Words
further
pressing stage produces two products Linking Words
cocoa
cake and Use synonyms
cocoa
, the Use synonyms
cocoa
cake is grided by machine or hand, and converted into Use synonyms
cocoa
powder, Use synonyms
hence
, it is already used and delivered to customers.
The Linking Words
cocoa
is not only sent to the industry cakes drink and Use synonyms
then
put in the Linking Words
cocoa
powder but Use synonyms
also
transform into industrial chocolate from the Linking Words
further
refining process produced. Linking Words
In addition
, it is added sugar and goes through Linking Words
further
processing, changing into finished chocolate products.Linking Words
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