The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure gives information about the process of university entrance for every student who is graduated from high school. As can be seen from the graph each applicant should pass various steps which are starting from acquiring high school and ending with admission to a university. After obtaining high school the candidate should complete the application form and send it to the admin. In
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step, there are three approaches to continue. The first one is rejection which does not take time,
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the two others need two weeks. In
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stage, the application can be cancelled, or completing the application for an alternative course and send it to the admin, The second approach is Provisional acceptance, so the applicant should compile documentation and send it to the admin. And the
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one is Acceptance Compete enrolment, so the candidate should select subjects and next register with the dean
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he or she gets admission.
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