The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The flowchart illustrates the various stages involved in preparing documents and

admin

confirmation for university entrance among people who graduated from high school.

Overall

, it can be seen that a total of stages are involved in the whole procedure, starting with obtaining high school, followed by

admin

decision

according to

documents and after approval, they can go to university. To being with, the graduated students complete an application form which can download from the website and afterwards,

this

form is sent to the

admin

to check. In the subsequent stages, three approaches happen, Acceptance Compte Enrollment and Provisional Acceptance are shown after two weeks and rejection is another one. Some of the rejected students, cancel their applications and the rest of them alter their course and

then

send them to

admin

again.

Also

, some should provide more information and send them to

admin

On the other hand

, if students get to receive the acceptance, they must select the object.

Finally

, they are able to entire university after selecting a subject and registering with Dean.

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