Most of the eatables available in the market contain high
sugar
levels.
Sugar
does enhance the taste and attracts many consumers towards it, but the caveat is, it
also
leads to many
health
problems.
such
as high blood pressure and
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composition in the body which could
also
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to a lazy lifestyle. Increasing
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of
such
articles could solve the problem but would that be the right way to solve
such
issues? I disagree with
this
idea. Even though it has some advantages, but a lot more downfalls. Businesses will be impacted by
such
a move, which might affect the
economy
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top of that, consumers who enjoy
such
and food with high
sugar
content will have a dent
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their pockets.
Everyone
is responsible for their
health
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to choose the lifestyle they want.
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such
policies where prices are increased for sugary
products
can impact society on so many levels.
Firstly
, businesses in these
products
will have to take a hit. Their sales will go down and less profit would be generated.
Hence
, less tax would be filed,
thus
impacting the
economy
.
Moreover
, the
sugar
sales will go down causing more trouble for the
economy
. A lot of people will go out of their jobs,
hence
disturbing the whole ecosystem.
This
could be a
move and will lead to more damage than good.
Secondly
,
everyone
is responsible for their own
health
and by imposing
such
policies we might affect the people who want to consume
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sugar
drinks and food.
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food
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considered to be a good mood lifter. Increasing their prices will hit the pockets of folks who relish those items.
For instance
, they will have to spend more money on the grocery,
hence
reducing their savings. Shouldn't
everyone
have the freedom to choose what they want to consume
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Everyone
is responsible for their own
health
.
In conclusion, I would say
everyone
is free to choose the type of lifestyle they want to
and the kind of
products
they want to consume. Forcefully pushing people not to consume
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sugar
products
will hardly do any good. It will impact businesses and the
economy
as well as
erode the saving capacity of folks who still want to go for it.