The graph shows females unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The graph shows females unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
The graph shows
females
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unemployment
rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. In the diorama, it can be seen female
unemployment
in four European countries
such
as England, Wales,
Scotland
and Northern Ireland.
Also
,it can be noticed an improvement in all indicators, except for
Scotland
. In 2013 the highest female
unemployment
rate
of 6.8% was in England.
Scotland
was in second place with a percentage of 6.1%. Next was Northern Ireland with a
rate
of 5.6%. And the country with the lowest score for 2013 was Wales at 5.4%. Now about the percentage results of 2014. Female
unemployment
in England fell by 0.3%, from 6.8% to 6.5%. A slightly larger result can be seen in Wales, where
unemployment
fell by 0.4% to 5.0%.
With the
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lowest
unemployment
rate
was
Northern
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in Northern
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Ireland with an indicator of 4.6%. The index fell as much as 1.0%.
In contrast
,
Scotland
increased its
unemployment
rate
by 0.6% and became the country with the highest
rate
of female
unemployment
in
this
chart.
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