The graph shows females unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The graph shows females unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
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The graph shows
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unemployment
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rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. In the diorama, it can be seen female
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in four European countries
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as England, Wales,
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and Northern Ireland.
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,it can be noticed an improvement in all indicators, except for
Scotland
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. In 2013 the highest female
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rate
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of 6.8% was in England.
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was in second place with a percentage of 6.1%. Next was Northern Ireland with a
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of 5.6%. And the country with the lowest score for 2013 was Wales at 5.4%. Now about the percentage results of 2014. Female
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in England fell by 0.3%, from 6.8% to 6.5%. A slightly larger result can be seen in Wales, where
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fell by 0.4% to 5.0%.
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lowest
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rate
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was
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Ireland with an indicator of 4.6%. The index fell as much as 1.0%.
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,
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increased its
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rate
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by 0.6% and became the country with the highest
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of female
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in
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chart.
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