The chart below show the propostions of Bristish students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, In 2000 and 2010.
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illustrates
the ratio of different Change the verb form
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language speaking
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language-speaking
students
from England, who can talk in English too in the years 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, in the year 2000 Spanish speakers were in the highest in
percentage, which was 35%. After that, 20% Change preposition
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students
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of students
does
not know about other languages Change the verb form
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besides
English. 15% Change preposition
of pupil
pupil
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pupils
language
and another language
as well. Last
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The last
percentage
belonged to Germany spoken Replace the word
per cent
learner
and Fix the agreement mistake
learners
learner
who can speak 2 other languages.
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learners
Whereas
in the age 2010, 10% students
can Change preposition
of students
spoke
no other Change the verb form
speak
language
, French, and German. By focusing, Spanish spoken students
5% increased from the stage 2000. In
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This
this
year the rate was 35%.
In both sectors another
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the
language
and two other languages spoken pupils ratio were
inclined by 5%.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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