The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling differents types of vehicles such as cars, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.
The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling
differents
types of vehicles Correct your spelling
different
such
as cars
, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, it is obvious that individuals have preferred cars
the most. In addition
, the number of cars
and trains using
Wrong verb form
used
have
increased gradually Correct subject-verb agreement
has
whereas
the figure for bus
users has declined slightly.
In the initial year, the proportion of car travellers stood at around five million
, followed by the quantity of bus
and train commuters with nearly 4 million
and 2 million
respectively. After 30 years, the proportion of cars
rose to 7 million
while
there was
more than 1 Change the verb form
were
million
people using train
to travel. Add an article
the train
a train
In contrast
, there was a slight drop of
the number of Change preposition
in
bus
users to approximately 3,5 million
.
Over the 30-year period, it is predicted that the rate of car travels
will reach a peak Fix the agreement mistake
travel
at
9 Change preposition
of
million
. Similarly
, a
slight growth is expected to be around 5 Remove the article
apply
million
. By contrast
, the rate of bus
passengers is foreseen to be less common and reduce to 3 million
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