The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling differents types of vehicles such as cars, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.

The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling

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types of vehicles

such

as

cars

, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.

Overall

, it is obvious that individuals have preferred

cars

the most.

In addition

, the number of

cars

and trains

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have

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increased gradually

whereas

the figure for

bus

users has declined slightly. In the initial year, the proportion of car travellers stood at around five

million

, followed by the quantity of

bus

and train commuters with nearly 4

million

and 2

million

respectively. After 30 years, the proportion of

cars

rose to 7

million

while

there

was

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more than 1

million

people using

train

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the train

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to travel.

In contrast

, there was a slight drop

of

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the number of

bus

users to approximately 3,5

million

. Over the 30-year period, it is predicted that the rate of car

travels

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will reach a peak

at

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9

million

.

Similarly

,

a

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slight growth is expected to be around 5

million

.

By contrast

, the rate of

bus

passengers is foreseen to be less common and reduce to 3

million

.